Wow
I wasnt expecting anything like what I just saw. I really enjoyed it. Your style and animation was fantastic, and it looked like you actually took the time and effort to draw out each bit of detail.
Dont listen to the people who call it "unrefined" or "confusing". You showed exactly enough to have it make perfect sense for any able-minded person. I liked how you added the quick scene at the end. It reminded me of the end of the movie Inception. It kinda makes you wonder if the whole thing was real.
Very well done! I hope to see more like this from you. Keep up the great work!