Poorly done
Seems like a rip-off of the much better game, Recordshop Tycoon, but doesn't take into effect some of the features of the other game, such as customer satisfaction and its impact on pricing.
The introduction of thieves was pretty awesome, but annoying since fast-forward automatically deactivates when a thief comes onscreen, something not mentioned in the tutorial, and can steal directly from your register. Seriously, in real life, no thief can steal from a register just by walking up to it and running away. I mean, doesn't a stick up take time to finish? Also, why can't I catch the thief when I'm literally clicking on his head?
Another thing missing is the stereotypical "demo" stations you can find in videogame stores. There are NO upgrades save cashier, ads, and stores; i.e., no shelf upgrades, no way to change the layout of the store, no way to change the "feel" of the store, etc.
The restocking function got really old after a while, as in after two days. Constantly having to click Restock>Auto restock was, well, a waste of two clicks.
And, annoyingly, an ad pops up after every 4 or so days that I have to wait 30 seconds just to get past. I don't mind ads in the preloader, but during the game? Come on.
Finally, just a few things that bugged me while playing this game. First, why is there a reward for capturing felons? I know it's meant to be an incentive for you, but that rarely happens in real life (and you're never actually compensated in merchandise such as games). Second, what happened with the graphics? I don't think I've seen such simplistic graphics for such a long time - about 4-5 years long. And third, all these games retail for approximately the same price. How can WoW be worth so much less than MBS if both are around the same price?
However, you do deserve some stars for your creative naming of the games and your attempt at creating a tycoon-style game. I'm sure it's difficult, never having done it myself.