This is an NGADM Round 3 review.
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Fixing the transitions because SkyeWintrest is judging is one thing. But making a terrible ending just to troll him because he's judging? Well, that's something else. I swear I heavily considered giving bonus points just for that. That's just hilarious. What's also amusing is that this is actually a very pleasant and well-composed track despite it being something of an experiment (and a very successful troll attempt because when I notified Skye of your ending he was like "WHAT"). You have some spectacular composition, that may seem a bit a slow-paced but is actually jam-packed with a bunch of melodic subtleties, harmonies and sweet motifs.
One thing I really like about this track is that it depicts a journey so well that there is literally not that much of a reason to stay following your intended storyline in the Author's Comments. The first part sounds just like a hometown, and what follows is very much of a "farewell" kind of deal. The song blends seamlessly into a more serious note as the adventurer makes his way to the desert (I'm being honest; great transition), and also morphs very well into the showdown (which OF COURSE is on top of a train in the desert. Seriously! Who didn't see that coming?). Really, you've got great transitions on the whole, and a nice structure to boot! Not a conventional structure for sure, but one that conveys a story.
What else do I like about this track? Well, the way the song opens up fourteen seconds in was just beautiful. I loved that! 1:23's little melodic phrase, while leaning ever so slightly onto the cheesy side, was also magnificently incorporated into the track, especially since you repeat it various times. I think your introduction of a breakbeat towards the end of the track was dubious at first, but I've got to admit, it's the kind of thing that, in some odd way, grows on you. Neat high pass filter on the bass at 4:31. It successfully managed to create expectations that the track was about to burst into a more exciting new section.
Really, I actually enjoyed this a lot! It hardly sounds "orchestral" in the way quite a few other NGADM Round 2 tracks were. This has its own unique little charm and even though you probably don't have amazing instrument samples, I don't think it showed in this track at all. A few issues you need to iron out though. Your reverse cymbal is again far too loud. It was also used too much. You milked it to the point that it cheapened almost every transition it was implemented in, which is a shame because you had a few impressive transitions. You have some nice percussion, but your tambourine is way too upfront in the mix. As much as I would love to give you bonus points for the ending, it is abrupt haha. There's a nasty drum roll leading to it that sounds really unprocessed and harsh; do away with that.
Scattered with a bunch of issues, but this was actually great fun to listen to, and I still can't get over how awesome you are for trolling Skye. Keep it up! Side note: was the melody in this track inspired by this? http://goo.gl/zYo0ZK
Score: 8.7/10