Just a suggestion
The animation and voice acting ain't too bad! But I couldn't laugh to it, if you work on the script a little better I think you could produce some good comedy animations. Hope to see more submissions from you in the future! keep it up!
Congrats
I are my very first bad comment, only because putting flap jack in a normal city context....
Eh..
I'll give you a 5 for trying, and then I'll add points for how many times I laughed.. Which is not at all
Flapjack?
The characters facial expressions and reaction remind me alot of flapjack, which isnt a bad thing. Come up with a more original idea and give it bright dialog. Not bad but not good.
You know whats funny, I only watched like flapjack maybe 2 times since its been on haha so I don't know
ehh
i didn't find it that funny and i don't really like flapjack i'll give it a 4 for making me chuckle a bit