dude that's not bad. The first few seconds made me think that it was going to be fairly dull but that soon changed. Made me laugh on quite a few bits. You certainly have strengths in storyboarding and script writing and funny faces. Also the timing of the actual frames was quite well done which gave the comedy a nice pacing. I think that this got a low rating because of it seeming unfinished with no audio and little shading or colors, but hey it was still entertaining and thats all that counts on newgrounds. Good job. I see by your'e profile that youe quite a capable artist. Why not show that off?
Reviews for "My PkMn Yellow Adventure"
it needs improvment
it would be better if it had music,sond,voices,and color
kinda funny
probably would have been a better web comic.
awesome, though
dude, i really liked it. maybe we can collab and make this into a full blast animation with sound and shit. hit me up if ur interested.
phlim2 responds:
consider it done. check your inbox ;D
I Liked It!
I have to say, as crude as it was, I enjoyed the artwork. This is a flash that I'd really like to see with sound and more animation. I think that's something you should definitely work toward. Regardless, I found it to be fairly enjoyable.
~Tovi~