wow
love the ending
wow
love the ending
What was so UnMethodical about it?
I liked it, but it needed more of an ending. The ending seemed tacked on an cliched.
i'll be honest, i made the ending up when i got there. I think it was mostly my organisation that was unmethodical.
They looks like motanka dolls with the cross on the face.
It was good.
But it's hard to understand what happen right at the moment you see it (it's after what happen next i found out what happened).
Like when one of thoses dolls ran away, we were seeing the perspective from the back.
It didn't really amuse or made me laugh but i bet you will get better with the time you keep up :)
i admire your honesty and constructive criticism :)
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im not even gong to make a list of the flaws
So instead, you decided to give a pointless review not saying anything about the flash or telling me what to improve on?