bravo
you need to make it longer
bravo
you need to make it longer
I have suggestions
Ok, i have seen better but i have seen much worse. Here are a few suggestions
1) Voice acting is a must for the next one. I'd much rather listen to Yoda's funny ass voice than read what he is saying.
2) Humor needs to be added, i realize you want to make it kinda serious but i come to newgrounds for humor, so add a litte bit in there.
Thats about it for now, ill rate it a 4 just because it has potential, the next one better be good!