Reviews for My first flash game.

[JTmovie]

Hey not bad for your first one!

You should really add to this

add some music

more enimies, different ones too, not just the arrow, maybe like an arrow that moves back and forth on the platform if you can do it

maybe more levels?

Character select (I know thats pushing it lol)

definetly sounds though and a finish screen where you know "You Win"

I know you said you dont know how to do more levels but maybe you could use a next frame button or a next scene button to go to the next level if you collect enough circles

I hope this doesnt get blammed but it might

but it be a good game if you added more things :) good work and good luck

[lordtac1]

Not bad

This is a great learning experiment, theirs just a few things you need to clear up if you missed them.

1- Check your "Fall" hit box that sets the "Died" variable jumping off the left side results in an infinite fall.

2- spend more time on level design, you seem to have enemies completed and coins as well, just make your level longer.

3- when you fall into a pit and die, the vertical movement isn't reset to 0 when you respawn causing you to fall through the ground.

Hope this helps

[oliverbulmer]

Pretty good, considering it was your 1st.

[nsb411]

hmmm, odd

After you "beat" it you can just jump off the edge in an endless loop of death. and then float on nothing.

also, music? levels? start screen? a lot seems to be missing.

[ObeseDude]

cool vcam bro.

the top of the screen flashes white when you jump and the score moves.