Nice
That's the best one by far. Although I will admit it was kind of short
Reviews for "Zelda Files: Chapter 7"
not bad
i say not bad but the thing is i liked the fact you want dark link as a good guy but the thing is he is evil made from link him self so there is no way he turn good but the story is good and i liked the pot in it but i just have to say that to make the story realy good you have to nice fighting scenes
peltos responds:
yes that is coming in the next 2 chapters. this is more like a introducing chapter.
Decent~
Obviously with it being YOUR flash parody thing you'll take artistic liberties and make the characters act and behave the way you feel is necessary. However I'll review it on the basis of being a zelda fan and all that stuff.
The being said there wasn't too much to harp on. The weed this IS too overdone for sure, but what makes it seem even less intelligable is the vulgarity in a few scenes. I won't harp on the whole "Dark link would never help them, blah blah blah" thing because of artistic liberty and the like, though it does seem kinda odd he'd just pop out of nowhere.
I DO like how you gave the different Links personalities to match their colors. Though you could work on it a little more with "Sapphire" and make him seem a bit less generic.
All in all, I'd say it was decent but could use a spot of work on dialogue devolopment. Just remember there are plenty of ways to convey emotion, and vulgarity cheapens the experience most of the time. If it's a character's perogitive to be vulger, just don't overdo it X3. As for voices, don't listen to that other guy >.> Link, or "Links" having voices is silly and completly breaks any kind of Zelda continuity in my (and a lot of Zelda fan's) eyes.
Peace~
peltos responds:
i really respect your honesty and i was thinking to put some mugshots or somthing like that in the next chapter so i hope that helps.
Not very funny
First of all the whole weed ting has been way overdone. Its not even funny anymore. Second dark link would never, NEVER, help out the actual link(s). Third I dont know why but I feel like this is just a lame ripoff of the 4 swords adventure series. Fourth it would have been nicer if their were voices and captions, not just captions. The only thing I really liked was the music, but even then everyone uses zelda music :P
Broken.
If I leave it sitting or take too long to read, the music messes up.
peltos responds:
yeah there is some error in the flash that i cant find. you just have to read the whole thing before your gonna do something else XD