Wicked yet strange
By 500 reviews I dont suppose you will read this, but wth.
I enjoy your simple and still very sufficient style of arts! Graphicswise everything can be improved but it seems to also work if you keep it to a bare minimum of details, and keeping what is setting emotion to a scene.
What I dislike is the fact the story and dialoge could be so much more flawless. To be contradicting this while making another flash, try using logic when portraying charaters! Simple motives that belong to a role just so easely make up for the narrow lines of a story. So while it is crutial to write a comprehensible story, the charaters action must always come beforehand and connecting it all logically, the sense of realism will never occur if they Characters) dont seem logial.
I like Moar, but if you maybe by a slight chance you read and understand this retarded writing, i hope you do improve! ;)