I like it.
Decent, I can tell you're just starting, but a decent start. Powerful message as well.
Reviews for "Jenny's love"
Juantopo responds:
NO MESSAGE WHAT SO EVER! if you know spanish, you will know i did this for a friend. under a script. it says "they promised to live happyly ever after" and then "for the cutest guy in the world, with love, jenny"
any way. id love some animation tips. if anyone can give them.
no need for a nine if not deserved, but thanks a lot
Nice work.
You are somewhat good for a beginner. After a few years doing that,you will become good,and you will one day,decide to remake that,in a better quality.
Continue the hard working for us,and you may be famous.
...Well.
Juantopo responds:
yeah, as famous as an internet celebrity can be.... not very XD
thanks for the inspiration. that is pretty much all i need to go on.
not bad
not bad for a begginer ive seen some bad stuff from other begginersand this aint that bad ad all
the story coud use some work
Juantopo responds:
there is no story, but im hoping soon i will pop something from here. just saying. nothing shure.
Complete Story (minus the interest)
For an animated short, you produced a fully coherent story that is simple to follow along with, which is much harder to do than it sounds so kudos.
Nothing particularly interesting going on, no tension/central conflict that absorbs the viewers' attention.
I liked the day/night effect you did with the sky while "David" is waiting for "jenny".
One more thing, don't use name labels with your characters in a cartoon short, especially when the main character's name is already in the title. It adds no meaningful frame of reference and just comes off as cheesy.
keep making more :)
Juantopo responds:
thanks for the tips. i know, i notest until i saw it complete that the name tags came off as unnesesary. but o hell, i did it for a friend under a script. (the friend's name is jenny)
ill keep up and progress in the work, im merely beggining
Wtf?
This what I got from the story. Guy sees girl. buys candy from her and offers it back to her. she go on a date with the guy. He tries to push a relationship on her. She refuses comes back 3 days later and asks him if he wants a relationship. several years pass and he proposes. Happily ever after ending. Honestly if this ever happened to a man I would feel sorry for him. Girls should be easier to catch but not like this one in this movie.
Juantopo responds:
yeah, you got everything right. pretty much what happened in real life, you see i did this for a friend under a script.
though, i upload this so i can get revews on my animating to. im merely a begginer, and i know the animating sucks on high levels. but o hell. i like your deductive abilities.