I quite enjoyed it, however...
I do think that people might appreciate a little more detail about the 'additional audio by Corey Taylor. It's from a track called Omega by Stonesour for anybody playing along at home. But maybe that sort of thing only matters to me :P
I do think that this was very well put together, and the atmosphere created by your camera play, visual stylings, and ambient sounds played a strong part in making this flash appeal to me even more so than the dark tone it had to it (which I also thoroughly enjoyed). I understand that the violence is an important part to your flash, however I do hope that your continuation will offer a bit more of an explanation for it. 5/5, 9/10.