was alright
kinda short but characters were pretty well drawn. Very good for a sceond flash most people still haven't figured out stick people at that point. :D keep at it!
~sOMeonEUNo
was alright
kinda short but characters were pretty well drawn. Very good for a sceond flash most people still haven't figured out stick people at that point. :D keep at it!
~sOMeonEUNo
Meh.
Annoying voices, I liked the graphics. Not very humorous, but decent for your second animation.
meh
To be honest, before you make anymore animations you have to get a better program. One that is quite good and I think is for free is "Audacity." If you get that program your animations will be alot better.
Also there was nothing flash about this animation. You need to create a better script as well. All this one was about was a horse saying it needed a crap and that was pretty much it.
I am not trying to be mean about all this, but if you follow this you will see an improvement.
Another thing is that it needs more movement. The whole way through was just lips movement. Make an episode where they run around the place or something.
Anyway, it is quite good for a first timer. Hope you do well
No, not really.
It was bearable to watch and the joke was decent, but the animation was minimalistic and the voices sounded like a little kid was doing it. With some revision on the next one, I might come back to watch it. I just might.
Suggestions
Just work on the lip syncing, audio quality, and story line. You're on your way.