Reviews for War for Awesometron

[tehbladeclan]

i have to admit

it was good but u no it didnt make me chuckle like mr lieratal i mean u could have said or made fun of more things to do with transformers. No offence but its a bit lazy by making just 2 people talking and not really engaging in combat or something, or maybe at least running around i mean i dno y but the animation it self didnt look as good as ur previous work like i could say for example that metal gear awesome 2 (not 1) was better than this or like girlchan in paridise 1,2 and 3 were better than this

well i guess the things you need to improve on is properly just making the characters actually talk about something to do with the game instead of just drifting half way into the conversation about nothing to do with cyberton or maybe u could have planned it a little bit better or something like that or made at least 2 minutes 20 seconds so at least i ca stay on my seat for a little longer cause i was expeting to do that u no i mean like have this not to be about talking but to be about like action and stuff cause it did disapoint me quiet a bit and i could find the easter egg (i dont think there is one) so yeh please take this as constructive critasim

THANK YOU

[Williamgood]

Eh okay..

Really wish you would go back to stuff like metal gear awsome.. combining the plot with jokes.

[Minners]

Could have played it out in the actual battlefield

With an Autobot and a Decepticon talking it was was ok.. But unfunny... Are you getting bored of Awesome videos? Is there a writers block causing this? I hope you take your time with the next Awesome video, not centuries or decades but get the jokes in at the right time. Bust some balls. But don't break them fully!

[FootX]

cmon egoraptor

you can do better man, dissapointed. :(

[DramaKaw]

A good effort.

Ego, your animation has always impressed me in anyway. But after watching it a couple of times, i realized that it is not really that funny. Don't get me wrong, you have one or two jokes there that made me chuckle, but that's just it, i chuckled. in your earlier stuff (Metal Gear Awesome and your shorts) made me fall to the ground. But not this one.

I think that in this flash, your animation was the strongest. The facial expressions were there, the movements were spot on, the background was, you know, awesome. But, I hate to say this, but the writing was the weakest. That was the problem a lot of the reviews pointed out. One person mentioned that you should hire a writer, I thought it was alright. I know you were trying to be funny, but it sounded like you were pushing it too hard.

I know, I'm a little hard on you on this. Writing is my strong-point and animation is my weakest point. To be honest, I actually suck at animation. Your animation is fantastic. I could not do any better than you can. If I could, i would love to work with you (If that is even possible).

I am giving you a seven for the effort of trying to tell good jokes and for your non-disappointing animation. Hoping to see more from you.

This review will self-distruct in five seconds...boom.