Plot was okay, everything else was bad.
Oh goody, sprites! If you can't draw your own graphics, you could at least align the pixels without warping, skewing, or rotating them. What's the point of it looking retro if you can tell it's constructed on a vector graphic program. The handmade graphics didn't look very good next to the pixels either, especially when they were made with default gradients, obviously poor brush-tooling, and 1pt lines.
First of all, what's with the madness day loader? Can't make your own? You could at least alter the graphics and make them relevant, although you should really just make loaders from scratch if you want them to look good.
A walk cycle should always be properly aligned with the ground, regardless of whether you animated it or not. Most of the walking was either too fast or way too slow.
It's bad enough to not have any vocal work, but to reuse the same sound effects over and over gives me the impression that the author doesn't spend much time at all on audio.
Another thing that annoys me was the use of emoticons in text. What ever happened to facial expressions? They're much easier to draw when you make your own graphics.
Breaking the fourth wall can be funny at times, but doing it so many times consecutively wasn't so humorous.
There were various spelling errors in the text, most of which were minor, but some of which confused me and took me a while to understand.
Why did the brightness and shading keep changing? You could at least find high quality sprites before making a whole movie with mismatching ones.
Sorry if I sound like a jerk, I want to be helpful and hope you can improve in the future.