Well..
The animation is sub-par. The story is humorous, if not barely existant and incomplete. And the title and description of the flash are misleading. Some constructive critism. This probably would have scored better if you hadn't posted it with a misleading title and description. Because the flash was actually kind of funny. As you said and I quote "Your not the one submitting SHIT animations." Thats right we aren't submitting shit animations. I have no intention of seeking validation from others on any of my work, if I were to ever submit anything to newgrounds or any other such site it would be finished and the best of my capabilities at the time of my submision. I would take the time to polish my work until it met some acceptable level of quality. If you don't want people to say bad things about your work, take a bit more time producing it. All told regardless of your current level of flash ability you could have completed the story and took more time on the flash. 0/5 0/10. Please work harder on your flash.