damn
that's one annoying kid.
good stuff though, short and sweet, with a good feel to it. ending was kindof an antiklimax, nothing happened - which in itself can be a fun thing, but all that buildup of bears rage makes the audience, i.e. me, want something to happen. ya can still break the rules of how to write a story, but something ought to happen one way or another.
still, great job you two! :)
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yeah pretty much...
felt the ending needed the bear to go running through the store in a mad rampage but it was still enjoyable.
l8s {as if i hadn't said this enough already...¬_¬}
What? No dick Jokes?
Just kidding.
Hmm, maybe the next instalment should be rated M
Cuz the Bear must kill Sergio. And end that character existent.
nice
it seems it wasn't too thought over though