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i think the other pppl look like zombies
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i think the other pppl look like zombies
Great Job ^-^
Dont listen to any of those fools, you could not have asked for anything more, it is a story line used alot, That doesnt matter, you altered it in your own way and created something beautiful for people to watch, all the world needs is a little more love and hope in it and you showed those in this flash. Beautiful work, I loved it
ok, here it is
so everyone needs to lighten up a bit, its his first time trying to make something that is somewhat serious, now i know it wasnt great animation and its a very common story but come on, it was good. you know, i did like your style very much, animation doesnt always have to be amazing to be great. im impressed and im glad to see new animations without gay jokes in all of them hahahaha, good job man, hope to see more
it was nice
you forgot to put the part where she got dumped cuz he was tired of waxing that corny ass lol but good try on making something which has some purpose
Not very good
I kind of liked the style, and how everything inverted when they met. But I don't really like the story at all. So what, the girl leaves the guy for an annoyingly stereotypical jock (flexing his muscles in every instance involving him), and then eventually goes back to the first guy in the end, making everything ok? I'm not sure what kind of message this is. This is the kind of flash that's meant to be very, for lack of a better word, "sweet", but this story isn't very sweet at all. It's just like... a typical thing that happens in other relationships, and just makes the guy look like a pushover and the girl as shallow.
And also, I'm really not a fan of the ever growing-then-shrinking heads thing you've got going on here, or the lack of really any scenery and copy/paste featureless people. Especially how the people at the start are moving their legs but not moving anywhere. I liked the music, though.
It's a pretty good try, but not a good cartoon. There wasn't anything objectionably bad, I just wish it was done better. It's the kind of movie that tricks people into thinking it's sweet when it's really just pretty generic.