Well.
I'm going to be honest, I'm a huge kirby fan, and I really enjoy newgrounds parodies, but this... it was just... a little too try hard. The jokes weren't all that well thought out, and at times, I was wondering what was happening. But in me being a kirby fan, I just think my standards are pretty high. You guys did a great job animating and creating this, but I don't know, a lot of it was really drawn out, and unneeded.