The sine wave beginning is nice
I can see that you are a fan of Aphex Twin, so I'll expecting some weird shit in this track :)
the percussion is nice and glitchy, and the rest of the song is very nice and smooth. Awesome. When you bring in that heavily reverbed drum beat, it just kicked itself into a whole other groove. Sweetness, bro.
I would like to see that beat ellaborated on, but the little distorted line you brought in felt good as well. Its just that when you bring in the full industrial groove, you should turn it down a bit. I was still trying to enjoy the ambience, but the drums crowded it out at that point.
Good work, I am a fan of ambient. You just have some small things to work out.
-zenon-