pretty good
made me laugh... but didn't quite get it but still good job
Reviews for "Enjoy Your Heaven"
Not sure I caught the point...
Don't get me wrong, there clearly was some hard work put into this toon. The animation is for the most part well-done. The character designs were also solid and the voice acting was nice and clear. I just have to wonder exactly what the reasoning behind this cartoon was. You put that it was Comedy on the sidebar, but there's nothing comedic about it. There weren't really any jokes (Clever or stupid) and I can't see it making anyone laugh. I watched it 3 times hoping to find some type of analogy or allegory but there wasn't any of that either. Pointless or not, good production and effort as far as presentation, but for all the trouble you went through with the storytelling it doesn't really elicit much emotion or thought.
Awesome flash.
You might be wondering why the review is so low. I really enjoyed it, and the lighting and all was great, but it was very low quality and fuzzy, even with "high quality" turned on. Also, I noticed that the lines weren't very smooth, so it sort of took away from things... all in all, a great flash, and if those two little things were fixed, you'd have damn near perfection.
nice
Very nice. My only problem was with the story. I still dont entirely know what happened. It appears that he was arrested for sneaking back into heaven after... ehhh, pissing off he who is without petty anger? And then, during his 2 hour ago flashback, it seems he was arrested whilst sneaking someone ELSE into heaven for profit. He was leaning on the hole, carelessly, not worried at all about getting in. So i question... what was his motive?
Needs More
don't get me wrong, I thought the idea were perfect, a failed salemans kicked out of heaven, getting his own back by helping those in pergotry was a brillent idea, but lacked substanse. It needed lengh, the ending, while funny and unexpected, wasn't what it had been building up to.