nice
likes:
the voices
the drawings
it was like a movie
Reviews for "Enjoy Your Heaven"
Not sure I caught the point...
Don't get me wrong, there clearly was some hard work put into this toon. The animation is for the most part well-done. The character designs were also solid and the voice acting was nice and clear. I just have to wonder exactly what the reasoning behind this cartoon was. You put that it was Comedy on the sidebar, but there's nothing comedic about it. There weren't really any jokes (Clever or stupid) and I can't see it making anyone laugh. I watched it 3 times hoping to find some type of analogy or allegory but there wasn't any of that either. Pointless or not, good production and effort as far as presentation, but for all the trouble you went through with the storytelling it doesn't really elicit much emotion or thought.
Great effort, boring movie.
Not to be rude Curtis, but I just didn't find this to be funny. I know that you, along with James and Hania Lee will get upset at seeing this, and your fans will hate me for this; but I am going to be honest here.
In terms of art and animation, it's excellent in a way similar to Fox and the Mirror and Snow, Snow for Lucy. I'm not going to hold this against you for submitting this as a video file because I think video submissions should be treated like regular flash submissions. Then there's the sound, which I consider a mixed bag. On one side, you have great voice acting, but on the other, you have unfitting music playing, which is one of the major flaws of this cartoon. The music didn't match the situation that the main character was in and effectively killed the mood that you were aiming for. Of course, there's the content, which, like the last criteria, I have mixed feelings toward. Sure, it may be original, and being original is good, but only if the idea works. What prevents this from getting a high score from me is the lack of comedic timing/delivery. When it comes to jokes without punchlines, the timing and delivery are important. I think you need to learn how that works because that is what also affects this to where I wouldn't recommend this to anybody. As for the filesize, I'm not going to let that affect the score that I'm giving you, but I have seen flash cartoons that were much funnier and had a much smaller filesize.
What I did like:
-Great animation
-Good voice acting
-Original
-Nice choice of angles
What I didn't like:
-Unfitting music
-Unfunny. The jokes were delivered with next-to-no timing at all.
Overall: This may seem harsh, but the lack of such criticism is just jarring. However, I am going to be fair and here's a six out of ten.
Well worth the wait
I love it. The voice acting is great, the visuals are excellent, the plot is not some poorly thought out piece of crap, and it's quite funny. I'm a fan. This is excellent work!
Good work
Well made and quite entertaining. I liked the way we gradually learned about what he did. There's not much to say that hasn't already been said in other reviews.
On an unimportant note, why not co-author the musician and sound guy? It's sorta inconvenient copy+pasting links from the comments and deleting the space. You might as well put your YouTube channel as your website for easy access while you're at it.