Very nice
The animation was excellent! Some of the best I've seen in a long time. You should go forth and finish it because I think you have a real talent. However, since there is no sound (hopefully it's not my computer acting up) and since it's not a finished piece of work, I gave it a 9/10. IF it was finished, it would be a perfect 10. Please finish it. You're sure to get front page! And keep up the good work!
Thanks a lot!! I'm making plans to make more episodes with better quality and sound ... (you can read about my plans here: http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view /538522, if you want). Hopefully I'll have more good stuff soon!! Thanks for watching and reviewing!! :D :D
Amazing.
Though even if its just in the works you can really see the time and effort as of far. I expect this series to become one of the best. Best of luck and hope to see the completed work and more ^_^.
Thanks a lot!! I hope it becomes a really great series too! Hopefully I'll have some more good work soon!
Impressive for a draft
Obviously, you need to finish the animation, however, this was well-thought out and I'm sure will become quite good. One thing though- in the final version, you should add some sound. Not even music, just an ambience with sound effects would work.
Nice job!
Thanks for the review! I'm not sure I'm going to finish this exact episode, but I have plans for more ... and I'm working on getting help with sounds ... (if you're interested, I write about my plans here: http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view /538522) Hopefully I'll have some better stuff soon!
Really enjoyable
The quality of the animation at the start is wonderful, and watching the rougher animation is quite fun as well, I love to see "behind the scenes sort of stuff, seeing how a piece develpos is half the fun for me :)
Looking forward to seeing more!
Thanks! Hopefully I'll have more soon!! I wrote about my plans/plottings here: http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view /538522, in case you're interested.
Yep, it's unfinished, alright.
But it's still simply amazing. The animation at the beginning was smooth and gorgeous, and the story is more interesting than I'm capable of making. I can't wait to see the rest! ^_^