Okey
Saw the end coming from a mile away, and the voices were annoying. But it was not too bad.. just work on your animation and your voice work, and soon you'll get
10s, but for now, i give you a 5.
ps. sry if my english sucks(it's not my first language)
yuppers. I sound like a yobbo. It was the first time I ever did voice acting and I sucked. I know I wouldn't have done a good job of it but just thought that it would add abit of zest if I added voices.
and your Enlish is very good
'twas ok
The drawings look nice but the camera angle is too far away. And also the background is too bright and distracting.
thanx buddy I will take this into consideration next time I do an animation :)
Sorry to say but
That was pretty bad, The voice went off straight away and unfortently the text was off straight away it didn't really seem to have that much point and the ending was pretty predictable but since its your 2nd try its not supposed to be perfect.
2 stars for the animation only.
thats ok you are just being honest. I appreciate your insight on it and I will reflect apon this if I ever make more.
No, dude.
This was awful. It seems like you just decided to play around in flash then started drawing Mass Effect characters, then used Audacity to raise your voice pitch while you made up lines. Trust me, this isn't worth the effort you didn't put into it. If you had actually decided to research the game for ideas, then made a serious effort, then this may have been a decent parody. I'm not trying to bash you, but this wasn't even close to anything remotely funny, and the high-pitched voice thing never works like this, it's only an annpoyance. Also, if you had played the game, you would know that QUARIANS AREN'T GETH. Legion is Geth, Tali is Quarian. I know it's just a parody, but it doesn't work if you break canon. I'm sure you could have made this funny, but it's not...
Again, I didn't write this to be mean, I wrote it to help you in the future. I'm sure people are just going to flag this review anyway, but I want it to be known that it's not inteded to hurt you.
thats ok basicly everything you said was true. My heart wasn't in this at all but I thought it would be funny to make out that Tali was geth because the Quarians where the ones who created them so that maybe they would have the same characteristics even though logic tells me that was highly unlikly. So yeah this was just a lame joke. I used the high pitch voice cause I hate the sound of my voice. and as for graphics I did short cuts where ever I could. I didn't even bother to have the voice in sync. I probably should have just did a comic on this and not bother with animation realy lol. so no hurt feelings buddy. Lately however I have been investing alot of effort on the game I want to make. Hopefuly it will be a great improvement but my animating skills will still suck unfortunatly. :D