I have to see the rest!
You do realize that this will stay in my brain and haunt me for ever more until the whole flash is release? Congratulations!
Reviews for "Lionel & Janet Trailer"
Well I loved it
I Don't care what everyone thinks, You worked hard on this, You desirve a lot of credit. And I cried. Brovo to you Aero. And "not Newgrounds material" What a load bull.
It worked.
Mission accomplished.
I am interested ;P
One thing though, was it just me or did some of the slides seem out of order? But it could just be me, it has been a few years since I last read Romeo and Juliet.
Not Bad
I really like where you were going with this, i just wished the picture wasnt so grainy. Made reading the words and some of the shots a little hard to take in.
Not sold
I read the description only after I watched the flash, but watching the flash, I could barely assemble anything that approached a coherent plot.
After knowing that it was supposed to be Romeo and Juliet, the images made a LITTLE bit more sense, but not much. Because the images by themselves rarely are capable of setting up the narrative (even as one as well-known as R+J) as you present it. I thought the main dude got married at least twice in the flash; it was all very confusing.
Hell, in the very beginning, you make it look like the two are the last survivors of a nuclear holocaust for goodness' sake. I didn't know WHAT the fuck was going on, and the whole "new generation, a new story" doesn't really jive with the fact that this is a REMAKE of Romeo and Juliet, you know?
Hope you got a nice grad on the project, and if I were a teacher, I'm sure I'd give you a solid B+ for the effort, but as a viewer on NG, this really needs a good dab of coherence and some better sequential staging in order for me to actually decipher what the hell was going on the whole time.