i do enjoy your flash
your animation style is good, but it's just sound that you need to work on, your characters sound too much like they're just reading from a script, and also the lack of clear sound effects where they should be used, makes the movie seem a bit dull... take it from me, i'm a professional actor, and i definately say that it could use more sound effects, and for god's sake! would it kill you to emote a little more in your actors voices?
anyways, good job, i give your flash a five for my vote, but because of the voice acting quality and lack of sound effects and akward silence i'm personally rating this a six
ps: don't thake this personally, i really do think you have a great animating style, it's just, that as an actor i can't stand the lack of sound in this and the quality of voice acting, this animation deserves better