My 2 cents.
Quality in this was lacking consistency. It had times when it looked like you spent some time to draw while others it looked like you put in 5 mins of time max.
The music quality was lacking as well.
You did try and sync the audio with what was going on, so I will give you that.
Most of the video I was beside myself wondering what the hell is going on, because it was a lot of random unfortunate events.
I think if you were to give the story... a little back ground it would help. For example if we knew he had an important meeting or closing sale thing he had to make it to.