um.... wow
the animation was good but the fighting was a little off. work on that other than that it was good lol
Reviews for "The Last Fight: Final Ep"
Hm...
Dude this was almost good.
You could make the fights a little more better... I liked the way you added the wind etc. But please make it easyer for us who watch this to understand the battles etc.
Other than that this is awesome ^^ Keep it up!
lol
So, the background is the exact same no matter what the camera angle is. Seriously, the sun looks like it's behind every character at all times. 2 points off for that, serious failure. It is moderately animated, but through filters and effects, you managed to give us the illusion that it's better animated than it really is. 1 point off because I don't buy it. You also managed to comply to quite an insane amount of "artistic" fighting cliches. 1 point off for being unoriginal. 1 more point off for not having sound effects through most of the animation.
I will give you 5 points for style and effort.
You get my 3/5 and 5/10. Please reflect upon what I wrote here. Let me just give my thanks to the people who will vote my review as "useless" because I did not just write "OMG THAT IS TEH BEST 10/10!!!!1!!"
Still Needs Some Work Before you Reach the Gold
If I were to have rated on animation alone, I would have probably rated this between a 5 or a 6, but with your excellent camera angles and proper music choice, it helped raise my rating up to a 7.
Music:
As I said, two thumbs up on the music choice, very fitting,
Style:
The style of the art you used for your movie is very unique and would love it if you keep to it. (Did not affect my grading).
Camera (viewer's POV, etc):
Your skills with the angle and dramatic shots are really superior compared to many flashes I see here. Most of them usually just show a side angle where you really put that camera where it needed to be, because of this it helped save your score.
Animation:
This was probably your weakest feature in your movie.
Using about four frames to make hair and clothing movement repeatedly can get a bit repetitive and for the speed you were doing it it looked a bit lackluster, I would prescribe more frames for those.
Your dramatic stills were quite nice (except for the clothing fluttering in the wind) where the protagonist would pause after hey slayed an enemy.
Also, at the parts where a character's head was moving around, the animation seemed a bit jumpy and sloppy. This also applies to some of the other movements the characters made. (The sword and running sequences were the only exception to this).
The Biggest Problem I found was the fight sequence with the Boss Demon (the one who stopped the sword), where you used the SAME animation when he was attacking the demon over and over. This is what really hurt my score to you.
To close, I really believe that with some practice, patience, and more practice you could become a more well known traditional artist.
Some helpful tips would be to pay great attention to detail, ask yourself, "Is this animation cycle as smooth as I can make it?" And to also push yourself to your limit each time because your limit will expand after you reach it.
I look forward to more work from you.
well
i liked your animation style, but fights were one sided and i could not even separate the "boss" from the others.
the music could also fit better. the thing i liked most were the shadows.
all in one it was like "emo kid fighting monotone creatures with ninja sword and nuclear explosions and probably cries in the end" - this flash needs more personalty i guess xD