Reviews for Shy Guy's Mini Adventure

[hiddenthecakeisalie]

its okay.

I hope it didnt really take you 6 months to do this. Its not exactly original, or hard at all. its relatively short too. here's some things to improve

Get rid of the annoying mario music
Add enemies and more levels
Add sound effects
Have a plot or something
Go look at other mario games. They have double jumps, kicks, punches, and originality in most of them. Do that. Add attack moves, and do more then a jump platformer. If you do all of this (alot more work of course) then add a tutorial so people know what to do. I had no idea that you were supposed to click the win or loser button, but apperently you do.
put on a higher framerate

[Randomguy78]

too short, too boreing, too easy. and EAR RAPE

make another with enemies, like an oncoming mario or somtin. but wait your flash died, so get a new one and then do it. AND WHEN YOU CLICK HOW TO PLAY THE MUSIC OVERLAPS, IT'S EAR RAPE, FIX THAT!!!

Din-Jin-Jin responds:

I'll try :]! You should coin the phrase Ear Rape btw =)

[Viktor]

It is okay.

The controls are a little too sensitive, causing me to lose mor ethan 6 times.

Try allowing both arrow keys and WASD keys.

And, Last of all, If you use your own graphics, or collab with other artist, you could make a very good game.

Din-Jin-Jin responds:

Thanks man!

[NickySweetie]

Hmm...

This isn't very bad, but it definetely needs a storyline. Other than that, this is nice.

Din-Jin-Jin responds:

Thanks!

[Vengroe]

Needs improvement

Major sound glitch, the music playing on the title screen continues playing throughout the game, while the same music attempts to start once you start the game, having both playing at once.

The jumping has a bit of trouble. sometimes I can't jump even though I'm on the edge of a land block.

Finally, a bit of storyline would be nice.

Din-Jin-Jin responds:

Thanks for the tips :]