Excellent
The drawing serves perfectly the story and the "ambiance" (Sorry, i don't find the word in english).
I loved the shaky effect. You're right when you say it had life.
The only thing I'm sad of, is that I couldn't read all thing the people in the conversation box were saying. It was too fast and do pale. But, the fact of matching the words's color with the character's color was brilliant.
Can't wait to see you're next animation!
Thank you! And most of the text was actually just supposed to be somewhat of a side-effect, like in the background just so everyone wasn't just staring at eachother. But IF theres a sequel (:o) i'll be sure to make the text longer.
Good work!
This is a very good animation, it had a very good storyline. I see it winning an award.
Seriously? Wow, thanks. Never thought people would like it that much :D
Hey! ...
Your welcome :)
How nice :)
Thank you :)
Respect
goes to show it's in the story more than clean lines and fancy frame work
Exactly! Thanks!
Interesting
There's more behind this story. I'm curious to see the rest.
The moments where the characters did move showed a good presence of animation, the mysterious feel it all has does intrigue, and seems to hide quite the story.
It was a bit choppy, though. And I don't mean the shaky animation. I'm well aware that that's a style, but as finderr pointed out, there's too many darkened screens going 'later', etc. It minces the experience quite some. I'm not saying you shouldn't use them at all, but some moderation would be nice.
Last and certainly least, learn the difference between 'to' and 'too'. It's not that important, but when I see those types of mistakes it makes me cringe. That's just me, though. Perhaps I shouldn't have said anything about it.
I want to see what this world looks like. I eagerly await the second.
Cheers,
~Glun
Thank you for your review! And I'll make sure to get the "to" and "too" right next time ;) I'm going to use a different way to transition the animation next time, it should fix up the "later..." things all together :3