Great Potential!
It was very smooth animation indeed, and I'm sure you can polish animations like this up and make it wonderful. I'll be sure to check out your future animations, as if they improve, I'm sure it'll get into the High 3's or maybe low 4's in scores, deservedly!
Hm...
I think Indiana Jones would disagree with this statement =))
Right
I didn't quite enjoy the jerky animation, but that's the lack of onion tool I suppose. The music could've been better, put more effort in finding a decent piece in the audio portal next time.
The flow, however, was alright, I liked how you developed the story. It's also quite a decent piece of fbf (frame by frame) animation, mind you that. A firm 6 in my opinion. And I definitely see room for awesome improvement. Use the onion tool next time, spend some hours coulouring it in, fix the animations and you'll get a neat score.
Quite good
I like your style man, good use of camera angles, nice drawing, make it color, add a background and i'd bring it up to a 9 :D