Now THIS is much better.
Well, its much clearer anyways XD
Anyways, to the song. The phasing lead is great, it adds that nice fel to it, but I can easily identify it as 3Xosc too much... maybe add some more FX?
The part where all the countermelodies come in with the tamborine is great, but I'd like to have those dist drums kick in sooner. Just to get the groove in the right place =)
Also, it would be awesome if you turned off the distortion when you break the song down. So that we can bask in the drum work =D
Great work, I am rather pleased with your music! Keep it up!