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Reviews for "ZOmbie Wars-Trailer"

well

first of all, for a trailer, have some msuic in the back, like an erie typr of thing, and second of all, this reall bugged me, you didnt have a background!, if you want it to be successful, you MUST put a background in, otherwise its almost an empty animation, and also the gunshot at the end, get a sound effect for that... a gun blast is probably the most common sound affect you can get on the net.

i dont want you to be dicouraged from making the actual movie, because you have got potential, the art just needs to be touched up a little, maybe you could buy a graphics tablet? only if you want to make more animations, but you can get them for £20 on amazin, i dont know how much that is in dollars, if you are american, but its a really good thing to have if your serious about this.

TopHatStudios responds:

Uh.. I have a tablet........and turn up the volume there is music and sound effects.....

It's okay.

I wasn't quite impressed with what you had so far. Too much blur effects, no background, and I couldn't see what the plot would be for the final product. I did like the gun twirling and the characters' design though. My suggestion would be to read up a little more on animation, optimize the drawings so they don't look as wriggly, and keep working on your skills. I wouldn't give up on the idea you have, just take some time to refine it and you might have something here.

Keep working on it

This didn't really interest me too much, which is bad because that's the point of a trailer. What it did like is the fast paced action feel it had. Try adding better music, backgrounds, and some evidence of a plot. Add these and I'm sure you'll get a better outcome. Also, perhaps make it a little more dark, to get the feel of a zombie movie.