fantastic music, okay graphics
I gave it a 5/5 purely because of the music, but I have to say the animation and graphics are a little too shallow and simplified, I don't feel a sketchy approach suits the music and the scene it creates.
Reviews for "Worlds End Umbrella"
k3ltr0n responds:
thanks i made the song all by myself
MIKU-CHAN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!XD
-2 points for the animation that is all.
HATSUNE!!!!X)
Interesting.
Well at first I thought it was something to do with RE since you wrote worlds end together with Umbrella. But forget about it. Your theme overall, was a pretty good idea. The animation with the song was cool. Only thing is you need to practice more so that it looks more polished. However overall I think its pretty good.
Cats
-You did a good job with the story. I felt sympathy for these cats and I almost became entranced into the journey they went through. While it's pretty much telling the story of the song I think you did a good job of interpreting it into pictures so even the deaf could enjoy this.
-The drawings were cute and felt appropriate, but the animating was what hurt this project most. The animation needs more work, yes it's a tough and tedious, but doing it can change a good flash into a masterpiece alone. Just keep working and learning and you'll make great pieces of work in time.
-Review Request Club
I love it.
I love videos that focus on the song, and I love vocaloid as well!
I rate it a little lower than a 10 due to parts where you just showed frames of them progressing up instead of animating them fully running around the staircase, you could have made them just run really fast instead, to keep with the flow and towards the end you made the text go almost too fast, if I wasn't a fast reader myself, I might have missed a bit of it.
All in all, a damn good job!