nice
nice one, cant believe why it gets a 1.6 when ive seen ALOT worse movies end up above 2.0. Maybe add some colour and come up with a good punchline
Reviews for "Tobi´s First Flash Anim."
Tobibrocki responds:
Once I get the coloring of things right, my animations (at least newer things) will be in color! Promised!
On the Punchline, maybe my Humor is just bad! ^^´
Anyway, this was just a test, nothing special in any shape or form! ;)
Not bad
It's pretty okay as far as first creations go, and you clearly have some drawing talent. Now work on giving your next one a bit of a plot, and go from there.
Namaste.
Youve got potential
Really good timing with the lip movements im impressed
Be More Patient
the sketch was good, you have a talent, just be patient until you have a mature submission, OK? no need to blow away potential audience, right?
Tobibrocki responds:
I uploaded another one, but thats my last one I´ve done so far (took a while to make too), and that one is probably a little better than this one, at least in length! :/ It´s still Black & White since I still don´t know how to do it properly! :/
I know my stuff is bad, but I feel the urge to show people what I have, and maybe get some tips on how to improve! :)
Soooo....
It's a nice start. Nice voice acting, nice animation, though too low framerate.
Now... why upload this to newgrounds. It's not finished at all. It makes no sense. Keep your tests to yourself ;)