Reviews for NeoPikachu AFD Collection

[FightingSeraph]

That poor collab.

When it came to collab series, All NG Fads Die! has to be my favorite of them all; combining a music video with the Stick Slayer and NG Assassin. Too bad that Radioactive is having a hard time with people signing up only to drop out. Truth is, I bet there are plenty of fresh meat for you, Rai, Logo, Topz, etc. to go after such as Miss Dynamite, Clock Suckers, Awesome, etc. With that out of the way...

In terms of art and animation, it may not be up to par with Bitey of Brackenwood, but gets the point across. However, in the chaingun scene from AFD 4, the chaingun had next to no recoil. The third Clock scene, on the other hand, shows that you have improved quite a bit. In terms of sound, unlike the actual collabs that those early segments were in, you decided to add sound effects. The music on the other hand, while it may be synonymous with the series, three of the songs didn't really fit; and I like metal myself, but I think you should have used either Superbeast or Reload instead of Columind and Heaven & Hell. As for the subjects, I like how you had target variety in that AFD 4 part, along with the weaponry in all the segments. However, I think that there are many a popular series for you and the rest of the AFD gang for you to trash all to hell.

What I like about this:
-Finally, something All-Fads-Die-related that just came out in three-and-a-half years.
-Good art and animation
-Good sound effects
-Subject variety

What I don't like about this:
-The fact that its mostly recycled footage from AFD 3 and 4.
-Black Sabbath and Filter, while far from shitty, didn't really fit.

Overall: Razorhawk/Neo Pikachu, here's an eight out of ten for doing what Radioactive24 and Logo/Smac haven't done in years: a new AFD animation.

RazorHawk responds:

Oh man, thank you for an awesome in-depth review.

Yeah, I did recycle footage from AFD 3 and 4, I wouldn't have done that if the AFD 6 part was longer, but that's less than 30 seconds. Not to mention those parts did have a few slight errors on the actual collabs themselves.

And yeah, I've improved a lot over time. As for the music not fitting, its kind of hard to find that one track that's "just right" and sets the mood exactly how you want it to. I thought Heaven and Hell and Columind would have done that, but hey, I respect your opinion when you say they didn't.

In all, thanks for going the extra mile to write all that. I'll keep in mind for all the future flashes I work on.

[XwaynecoltX]

Good lil pika

~~REVIEW~~
Now this was notbad at all i actually like it, I like the fact that pikachu is fighting and all and fighting the clock crew was a good idea but im thinking you could go one step better and have pikachu fight other characters not just the clock crew but robots and all sorts of stuff that would give it much more variaty, Theres not really much to say on this one but the fact it is a good idea, but also i think as stated that more variaty of villians and stuff just an idea or two there, anyways nice idea keep up the good work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I posted an idea or two about pika fighting more variaty of vilians and enemies, just a suggestion though.

~~OVERALL~~
a good idea here with the fighting but needs more variaty

~X~

RazorHawk responds:

Yeah, that's probably all true. Variety would definitely help next time.

I've been in a bit of a rut when it comes to making new flashes... not sure whether to start a new series or what, but I'll figure something out eventually.

Thanks again for checking this out.

[darkwindsage]

bad

just, bad

RazorHawk responds:

Well, I'm always looking to improve, so if you could let me know what you liked and what you didn't like, it would be a major help when it comes to making the next movie.

Regardless, thanks for leaving a review anyway.