Not too bad. . .
This is a pretty well made game with some nice music, but the preloader does seem kind of wacky. Unless you meant for the bar to constantly fill up then start from the beginning and fill up again. . .
The game seems a bit short, but nice.
A question; is the game supposed to end and go to a white screen with the words "just let me grab the key" on it?
PS: Nice tip things!