needs sound
but that is about it.
sort, good and smooth animation!
Reviews for "Mario vs Weegee"
JuicyLion responds:
Thanks.
ya ill work on that sound thing, at the moment im just learning how to code shit, so we'll see.
It's getting better
I like that you're going out of your way to find ways to improve this, rather than just submitting the same thing over and over again. I get the feeling that with some practice, you could start doing really interesting things here, but it's obvious that you're new to Flash, which is undoubtedly holding you back.
My suggestion to you is to watch the videos in the top 50 on the Flash Portal, and take notes about what they've done that makes their videos stand out, and then make some other new videos rather than improving this one. Don't submit these videos to NG, regardless of whether they're good or bad, use them only as practice. Then, once you've gotten really comfortable with using Flash and with taking what you see in your head and putting it on screen, use what you've learned to remake this entirely, and then compare that to this and see how much you've improved. Then use that as fuel for your future work.
Most importantly, keep at it!
JuicyLion responds:
Alright i'll try that.
Simple
Simple and entertaining. Nice work!