Very funny!
Great idea and concept! i feel like its been tho, but the way you put it together and added to it was really nice. But there could of been more time spent on the animation, which surprised me because ure animation is usually fantastic :/ but overall, it was pretty good. 8/10
Not too shabby!
I'm surprised this hasn't won any awards! Very entertaining piece, and I really enjoy the animation style despite the lack of mouth syncing and so on.
Good work!
cool
It made me at least interested in seeing the sequal.
Notbad
Well its notbad i found it very entertaining to be honest, the black and white was nice, maybe add a touch of color here and there, also the "AUDIO" was hard to hear at times so maybe by adding some subtitles it could improve on this, nice job.
How to improve on this???
Subtitles to start, a touch of color and maybe some special effects
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Thanks! I'll be submitting another cartoon soon that addresses all of those issues.
I think . . .
You should've cared more about putting out the better version. I loved the voice acting, it was great. The animation needed some serious work. Before anyone says anything, yes, I understand that was the storyboard. I think the animation of your other version really brought more out with the story, so I think that this one could benefit as well from that.