nice
its not bad keep workin on ur detail and drawing skills its by no means bad and im with tebone7 on this 1 sounds where damn great compared 2 some of the other crap here on newgrounds
Reviews for "Forest 2013 - Chapter 1"
its good
but u use the left for dead little scary music thing WAY WAY too much haha...it almost gets to the point of being funny haha..
it looks nice tho- well done
Meh
Ok, It has a good storyline Graphics are a little iffy though.Personally I see alot of potential for this flash 7/10
Cool vid, little strange tho
Sound files from L4D, the sniper from halo, and some strange language that sounds alittle like incoherent Russian babble :P
Not bad...
...But not great, either. S'okay, we start somewhere, right?
A few pointers:
Reign in those shoulders! Seriously, the shoulders on the soldiers are jutting too far out from the chest, it looks kinda weird. Some anatomy drawing practice should take care of that problem.
English. I know you stated that it isn't your first language, and there wasn't a problem with the spelling or anything, but your syntax was crazy, man! It made the movie unintentionally funny. Not really a big issue, though, unless you want your western coutnerparts to take it a little more seriously.
Otherwise, just use a more varied soundboard/track next time. Left 4 dead is still too fresh in our memories, feels a bit like a cop out.
Lastly, you say they're in the woods... but I didn't see any trees... or stumps for that matter. Just a heads up.
Good luck on part 2!