Not bad...
You're just testing, right? Looks good for a first try...
Let's see if you can come up with something bigger next time!
Reviews for "Sonic Short"
OK, but short.
Its good for a first submission, however it was waaaay to short, keep learning and keep up the good work :)
Also, try using more characters next time.
pearljam23 responds:
Definitely more characters at some point! Story first though, to improve that length.
Needs something more.
At the moment, it's kinda dull and boring. But you did say this was practice, and I suppose for a test, it's not that bad. I think Sonic could have been running faster maybe (kinda felt like he was running with some sort of restraining on his movements). Love the music though, and it seems you know how to handle music well in a flash.
The sprite where Sonic stopped randomly to lay down looked a bit odd, like pixel-y. Might have been a bad sprite or it wasn't cropped well. But easily fixable. I think the biggest issue is, you should make it much longer next time. Maybe something funny or random. Sprite sonic is usually good fodder for that =P
Good luck on your next try.
pearljam23 responds:
I was trying to use the sprites, for actions sonic doesnt really have (at least any sprites I could find).
The intent was to have him stop so fast that he falls backwards, then flips around so hes lying down facing the other way (the pose from the games continue screen)
I also just realized I completely forgot the charge-up sound for the end... I will have to get that.
Im working on my next one, and im actually currently working on beefing up his running!
Thanks for the advice!
umm
it good but try to make it longer and make sumthing original
n nobody like 2 read the credit, well sum people do
Sorry
This actually isn't that good. It's OK for your first flash, but people on this site have more expectations. The storyline was horrendous, I found no humor. At least it has good animation?...