OK, but short.
Its good for a first submission, however it was waaaay to short, keep learning and keep up the good work :)
Also, try using more characters next time.
Reviews for "Sonic Short"
pearljam23 responds:
Definitely more characters at some point! Story first though, to improve that length.
Sweet Jesus.
Great for a first try, but it needs some depth! He jumps, misses a ring, gets upset, and the end. Decent, better than I can do, but there's no sustenance, no story, slight of a sliver humor, ya know? Excellent first try, but it needs more to survive.
pearljam23 responds:
Thanks for the honesty!
The credits are longer than the flash..
You have some good potential to make some cool stuff, but this is too short for me to try to save it.