Ooh.
I just reviewed your other NATA piece, and i thought it worked really well - but in terms of captured emotion, i think this one is superior. It's a little cliche, maybe, with that metallic FX... but I like it :P
Dunno what else to say really, it's not very long and stuff.
But yeah, you're very good at creating emotive music and I think this one works well :D