I wish I could write metal like you! >_< <3
The intro is wonderful and definitely fits the title a lot. Definitely feels like ascension. This is right up my alley! :D It reminds a bit of music from The Black Mages.
I wish I could provide more constructive feedback, but unfortunately I don't know enough about this genre to help.
Thanks for the wonderful piece! I'm still rocking out to it! :D
~Phyrnna ^_^