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At first, I was like :|
But when the whale came, I lol'd hardly
The score is unfair :C
Reviews for "Slappy"
Thundaboom responds:
The whale saves the day!
What?
really random, but awesome at the same time!
Thundaboom responds:
Haha, thanks!
AWSOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:):)
DUDE THAT....KICKED....ASS!!! BUT REALLY WHAT WAS WRONG WITH THE DUCK? IT JUST EVAPORATED! PLEASE ANSWER! :)
Thundaboom responds:
DUDE THAT WAS THE BEST REVIEW HUH?
not something i really enjoyed
certain aspects of your animation i found to be enjoyable. i liked the mouth movements the way you combined tweening fx and fbf seamlessly. being as this was an animation based on talking, that should and be and was one of the main focal areas. that was the good.
one of your main areas that you need work, was in story. although there are many random animations that are good, i found this lacking greatly in context. little beyond two animals saying hi, was there anything. the opening wasn't awful, the area of "how dare you trespass..." but then it went to an area of random, too random to keep in context to the "story" and not random enough to be completely in the wtf category. another major area of needed work was on your drawings themselves. other than your mouths and the very badly drawn whale, your line work was very close to atrocious. if you are using a mouse try using the line tool and using the black arrow to smooth the lines into the shapes you want. it's a long process but so is all animation. if you have a tablet, this was inexcusable. just take your time.
i have nothing to show , so you don't have to listen to me. i'm not a professional or am i even all that good, but my advice is to take your time. animation takes a very long time. find some tutorials, and watch them and practice. look at how Johnny utah does his talking movies. watch cyanide and happiness, and study how they do their randomness. many of the artists on this site are very good, and will help you if you ask.
quite simply best of luck, but i did not find this very good.
hopefully i'll like your next one though!
the-mega-god
Thundaboom responds:
...what he said.
Ah... yes.
Lazily animated which would be forgiveable if the comedy wasn't based purely upon mentally handicapped animals saying "hi". Really doesn't feel like much effort went into this. Only redeeming qualities is the voice acting that caught various elements of surprise, horror and awkwardness and the animation although lazily done and incomplete still holds potential.
Oh and calling Elmhurst676 a poof isn't amusing, its just homophobic and grossly ill informed. Just because he puts on a few lady's garments here and there doesn't make him gay. It makes him the average Republican.
Thundaboom responds:
Hey, now this is a good review out of all the "4" reviews so far.
But hey, I see where your going. I still need some help there and here, but I'll keep on trying.
And about Elmhurst676...so THAT'S why he didn't vote for Obama! >_O