Sweet dawg!
Josh you did a great job on this. It is very funny. My grandma, mom, nephew, niece(Danny's daughter) and myself just watched it a bunch of times. Keep up the good work.
Reviews for "Primetime Primate PILOT"
smirkstudios responds:
Thanks a lot, Christina! It's good to see you even signed up for a NG account just to review and express your opinion. Even Danny didn't do THAT! I'm glad you liked it, and I'm glad you could share it with the whole family. You're going to be OUTRAGEOUSLY impressed by the new script I WROTE as opposed to IMPROV'D. My producer says it shows improvement by "leaps and bounds" in comparison. Make sure you check his stuff out, too, he's a great guy, not to mention hilarious. Just click his name under the author information (Jeff Short). Thanks again!
lol good work
the ending was funny i really like the part were they thought! they were doing cocain XD 5/5 10/10 keep it up
smirkstudios responds:
Thanks a lot, I'm glad you liked it! Stay tooned for the actual series which will be underway soon!
Hilarious!!
The whole thing was awsome
you should make a series about it
and if there already is.....ok
this flash reminds me alot of family guy
smirkstudios responds:
WOW, thanks! You officially made my day worth-while! I promise you that I plan to make a series out of this. I don't actually count this as an "episode" really, and I plan to write the actual first episode this weekend!
Thanks SOOO much for the comment. I'm honored that you compare me to Seth MacFarlane!
Entertaining
It was, good, if its meant to be mainly a comedy though you could put a few more jokes in, My favourite part was the ending, FALCON PUNCH
smirkstudios responds:
Thanks a lot! You're right, there aren't really any voice jokes. Everything funny in it was an accident, with exception of the visual jokes. Thanks a lot for the feedback!
i can see this going somewhere...
i liked it, the animation is ok and the storyline is good too. i can tell taht you took your time with it... the only thing i would suggest is to not put credits taht long at the beginning.
smirkstudios responds:
Yeah, I never had to make an intro before, and I intend to do a more elaborate intro when I make the first actual episode.