The story is all over the place and it's just weird,i mean you have the option to skip Maleficent and unlock the Keyhole that doesn't make sense,she just disappears.
The battle system needs so much work,it's like Final Fantasy but really broken,you can basically win any battle by just pressing the attack button.
The fairies "help" you on the Terra battle,even though they really don't do anything,unless giving you a ton of health you don't need is considered "help".
Now don't get me wrong,with a couple of fixes to the battle system and grammar,this game can be pretty decent.
Sorry if i sound rude,but i just felt like pointing out the flaws for you to work on,good luck on your future works.