Cool
I thought this was pretty cool for what I believe is your first submission from other comments I read. But anyways, try to add music and no Cookie cursor, lol. Good theme though. Who DOESN'T want to see a Rabbit steal a Cookie?
Reviews for "That Was My Cookie"
Heya!
Yay! My first comment on Newgrounds after 2 years of having the account! :D
Anyway, not bad, really
ok i will be completely honest...
i gave you a 7 beacus this is your 1st flash and in all actualty it wasnt that bad...
now for bad things sorry >.> lack of sound did hurt it and i felt the cookie thing was pointless... if it served some function it wouldnt be that bad but all it did was realy get in the way... ohh and make more of these i wana see that damn rabbit dead >:O
p.s. henke your a dick =.=
Shirokaze2012 responds:
^w^ thank you
and the lack of sound kills me too ^___^; i just cant find anything that fits :\ i'll probably fix all the problems with the music and the cursor when i find some music for it :3 and i may make another with the rabbit dead like as an add-on to this flash ^__^
thank you for the review
and alot of people here are A-holes :\ luckily not all ^w^
i oddly liked it
the cookie cursor got in the way of the animation and sound would be nice, otherwise I'm impressed with the animation, seeing this is your first. Hope you make more
Not bad for a first
The animation itself is pretty good, a little choppy at times (especially the jumping cookie at the end)
The mouse cookie was kinda annoying. I wanted to eat it.
Just keep playing with flash, and you'll get better :3