pretty good
the cookie cursur thing during the movie was really annoying, i like the idea but make sure it disapears during the movie
Reviews for "That Was My Cookie"
Shirokaze2012 responds:
yea, the cursor works diffrent than i imagined it would, it seemed like everything was out of the way in flash but didn't work to well here ^___^; thats one thing i plan on never doing in the movie again
ok i will be completely honest...
i gave you a 7 beacus this is your 1st flash and in all actualty it wasnt that bad...
now for bad things sorry >.> lack of sound did hurt it and i felt the cookie thing was pointless... if it served some function it wouldnt be that bad but all it did was realy get in the way... ohh and make more of these i wana see that damn rabbit dead >:O
p.s. henke your a dick =.=
Shirokaze2012 responds:
^w^ thank you
and the lack of sound kills me too ^___^; i just cant find anything that fits :\ i'll probably fix all the problems with the music and the cursor when i find some music for it :3 and i may make another with the rabbit dead like as an add-on to this flash ^__^
thank you for the review
and alot of people here are A-holes :\ luckily not all ^w^
not too bad
It is very hard to get movies through judgement without sound, though.
You obviously have some ability. The interactive did do something and the art is OK. Why no sound? A single sound would make all the difference. Take a look at my Tutorial submission, see if its any help.
Best Wishes & Keep going
Shirokaze2012 responds:
im actually well aware no sound makes things more likely to fail. i really couldn't find anything that fit too well with it, i spent several hours trying to find anything that may possibly have fit but no luck ^__^''
and thank you ^w^ i've tried really hard to not be lazy with this, animating takes alot more dedication than just scribbling in photoshop ^___^'
and i think i will take a look at that tutorial
Boring
The animation was bad, the story was thin and the lack of sound hurt it a lot. Oh, and the pointless mouse cursor that covers the movie during playback sucked.
Shirokaze2012 responds:
oh thanks for judging me as if i were a pro =__= because im not >:\ i appresiate the review, and im sorry it couldn't be more entertaining. i had only two weeks to get this done and because it was going to be displayed in front of a teacher who knocks off ten points off your semester grade for each bad word you say really put a limit on the room for creativity
i know the flash not having sound hurt, and im TRYING to find something that would fit, but i figured unfitting music would be even worse
and the mouse i agree was a bit pointless :\ but i like it, you could move it to the corner of the screen you know -___-''
but i do thank you for the review ^w^