charming
Cool story, I like the art. I'm instantly drawn to characters with huge heads and eyes with tiny bodys, that's exactly how I used to do it. It was actually somewhat nostalgic for me... Like watching an animated version of my grade school sketchbooks...
Check out Ego City, it's on Newgrounds. Something tells me it might inspire you like it did for me. It's not the greatest animation, but it shows that the style can work in any setting. Looking forward to your later work.